The opening of the show

After a class debate over linking the two plays "Twelfth night" and "The Tempest" we looked at the two plays to find a common aspect and we found that both plays open with a storm. This allows us to add a physical aspect to our work, we have looked at incorporating a dance into the opening of the play, and I think that it will be very effective id done properly. At the moment i don't think the dance is at the level it can be to create a hard hitting opening but I do think it had potential. I personally think that the movement should be a lot more classical to create a flowing wave like dance, which can become more frantic and physical throughout to show a storm and the chaos that comes with it. At the same time as the dance movement we have added in sailors who come out from the black and start to create sails with the black curtains and to start pulling thick rope to emulate the panic on the ship trying to amend the situation. We will also include the characters Prospero and Ariel to highlight clearly that we are opening with "The Tempest" extracts.

This is how I imagine the movement to look but in a much darker setting as we will be including strobe lights and a fog machine. The use of tech will be very effective is the opening motif as it will contrast what the audience is expecting as it is completely different to Shakespeare's simple approach to his works. We will be using the motif twice in the performance but we will change it for the second section as we will be using it to highlight a change in play and setting. We will do this through taking out Prospero and Ariel from the storm.

11/12/2014
We have kept the bare boned of this concept but over time the storm has changed massively, it has become much less physical in comparison to what we originally started with as we scrapped he dance which we had created and replaced i with freeze frames. Every person now has a number and comes on in order to create a picture on stage of sailors on a boat. Once everyone is on stage we begin to add movement and voice, some shout lines over the sound of the storm such as "Land" and "heave." This is effective as it gives the audience not only something to look at but a reason to constantly change their point of focus throughout, this keeps it interesting and engaging.

character exploration in twelfth night

When looking at my character i have been researching the attitudes of servants to their superiors on Elizabethan times. I found that they would have been very respectful to their superiors as they wouldn't have a lot of money and to lose their job over a snide comment or sly look would be the worst thing in the world. I do think that servants would let their hair down when not working or with other secants as they were normal human beings like anyone else who would have a laugh and joke around with their work friends. I have been told repeatedly that i need to lighten up in this scene and i have been working on my character to accommodate this. Originally i had a very swatty and nerdy character to fit in the school theme but i found that this makes my character sound harsh and serious which i don't want at all. I have tried lots of different types of characters like the school head girl type character which is less stern and more of a kiss ass character than anything. This did make an improvement and mad the character a lot more playful and chummy with the other character Feste, but the in the next rehearsal i tried another character which was a mixture of the two and was told that i had become more angry and stern again so i have decided to go back to the head girl type character who can have a laugh. i went through the script and highlighted all of Feste's jokes as this was a barrier at first to making my character lighter as i didn't pick up on the banter between the two characters so i didn't react in the correct way throughout the piece. I am working on making my character lighter in this through a more open and happy physicality and working on laughing in the correct moments during the performance. I use the set and the cloth in this extract to create more interesting pictures in the scene I use the red cloth as a noose during the line "but, you shall be hanged for being so long absent" and I release it on the line "turned away" this gives me more to do and makes the scene less static as we are making use of the set and props throughout.

11th nov the tempest

Today was a very productive day for me and Dan because we got lots of blocking done which took our piece from being very bland and simple to a lot more lively and interesting for an audience to watch. We have had a very planned and set out blocking for this scene for a while now and in this lesson we developed this and thought about our characters and how they would wove in the space in correlation to their attitude and approach to things. For example my character Miranda is a very free spirit who is very child like and playful in her physicality, after performing our scene to the class i was told in my feedback that i need to be more 'fairy like.' I have been working on this in the lesson and think i have achieved a more flowing and girly physicality through walking with my shoulders held back and being lighter on my feet. In this lesson we added lots of different blocking ideas and i decided to use the set more than we have been in the past, on the line "pray, rest yourself hes safe for these three hours" I jump up onto the stage blocks with my legs swinging and relaxed this created interesting levels in the scene and through me and Dan crossing over in this section it keeps it interesting and makes it less static and awkward like it was the first time we performed it. Also me and Dan have been thinking about our character connection as when we started we acted like two goof friends rather than two young lovers and this makes all the difference in a performing context. To create more of a love connection which comes through clearly in the performance we added playful chasing into the scene and suspense moments where Dan and i get really close to the point were we are almost touching and then one of us walks away. We didn't do those in our performance in front of the class as we are yet to perfect it and feel completely comfortable doing it without bursting out laughing. I still have a long way to go in my characterization and i will be working on the points which i was given in my observation feedback, for example i need to be less breathless in some parts of the scene where i get a bit carried away in the Shakespeare aspect of it all and put on a bit of a Shakespeare voice which i need to stop.

props and costume

 

This is how my character Miranda is usually portrayed when it comes to costume and this that this is quite accurate as she has lived her whole life on an island with no access to new styles. I have thought a lot about my costume and as the class have decided to set this play in a gangsta era how to plan my outfit accordingly. I don't want my costume to be so different that it doesn't fit with the other characters and looks out of place but I don't thin it should follow the gangsta theme as she wouldn't have been exposed to this style as a child. I am planning to wear a simple dress which isn't flashy or showy and doesn't have modern elements to it, I am also going to have bear feet as the character is a very free young woman who is comfortable living a natural life as she has grown up in nature living on an islands with her father.

This is exactly how I see Miranda to look as she looks very natural and young. Her dress is rough and ragged as it would be if you lived in the same clothes nearly every day. I will make my hair look messy and tousled as my character would not have access to modern hair equipment or accessories. I will also wear extremely minimum makeup just so I don't look pale on stage as she would have a sun kissed complexion I she's outside most days.

 

This is the attire that I would expect Maria the maid to wear in the original play as it is simple and dull and your typical maid costume really. As we are setting out Twelfth Night in a school to modernise it I will not be wearing something like this I will be wearing something more along these lines.

The tie will be different depending on what the others in my group are wearing but the simple idea is a black skirt a white shirt and a tie to make it perfectly clear that we are set in a school. I an thinking about getting glasses as my character is following the swatty rout but I haven't fully decided on this yet. And I will also be wearing tights as I have to jump off the staging and I think it will be practical for the sage. I will tie my hair back as I am going for the clean cut student look rather than the rebel like Ryans character the Clown who will be dressed messy and comical to fit his character.

 

The cloth 4th November twelfth night

Today's rehearsal was very productive as we came up with lots of interesting setting ideas and uses for props. To day we looked at a specific section of our script just before Olivia talks about her dead brother. We obtained a long red cloth from upstairs and tied it to the set to cover up a shrine we have created on the stage inside the stage blocks. We decided to use this piece of cloth for more than concealing purposes as it is on the stage anyway so why not use it? We looked at Ryan's lines as the clown ;
Two faults, Madonna, that drink and good counsel
will amend: for give the dry fool drink, then is
the fool not dry: bid the dishonest man mend
himself; if he mend, he is no longer dishonest; if
he cannot, let the botcher mend him. Any thing
that's mended is but patched: virtue that
transgresses is but patched with sin; and sin that
amends is but patched with virtue. If that this
simple syllogism will serve, so; if it will not,
what remedy? As there is no true cuckold but
calamity, so beauty's a flower. The lady bade take
away the fool; therefore, I say again, take her away.

The cloth is used almost entirely in this speech as we thought it was very funny and made this section of out extract interesting and fun to watch, in the first line we added in a cheap joke where Ryan puts two fingers up to Chloe the authority figure in the piece in a rude and disrespectful way then he turns it into a piece sign and gives her a big grin ad the clown character would do. Next he will pick up the ends of the cloth and place them around hos neck to imitate a royal to show his control and power in the situation as he taunts Olivia. During this speech Ryan works the cloth creating different images to fit the speech and what he does is very lyrical movement. For example on the line "virtue that
transgresses is but patched with sin; and sin that amends is but patched with virtue." Ryan created a nun head cover with the cloth and quickly opens it up like a bat on the word "sin." On the line "The lady bade take away the fool; therefore, I say again, take her away." Ryan runs across the stage and is choked by the cloth revealing the shrine behind to allow Chloe to come in as her character grieves for her brother.

the cloth is used later on in the piece and still has many opportunities which we are yet to discover.